Feedback for our First Draft

Feedback for First Draft Music Video.docx

We have been given feedback from Mr Ford for our first draft music video, and we have recieved a top level 3/ low level 4. Based on this feedback we plan to change several shots.

• We will film the three interior shots outside as we agreed that it didn't flow with the rest of the video. We plan to use similar locations as previously used, such as Ellie's garden, the pavillion and Holly's garden.
• We will also change the shot where Ellie is laying down on the ground, as we all agree the angle is off and not as neat as the rest of the shots. Luckily, when filming on the day we agreed to film that same shot in a different way, so we have footage of Ellie standing up and singing in her garden.
• We will reshoot the shots that use a fence in the background. In total this is three seperate shots, two where she is sat in front of it and one close up shot. We can also refilm these in the same locations as mentioned above as they worked before and look good in the video.

We plan to refilm these either this week or next, as this will then allow plenty of time for further reshoots and editing, as well as creating a second draft to recieve final feedback on.