How to improve our music video

 

 

This screenshot has been taken from the mark scheme and will help us to distinguish what we need to do in order to make our video a level 4.

We are currently at a high level 3/ low level 4 and we wish to push our grade up even futher to get the highest mark possible.

Based on Mr Ford's feedback we know what we have to change, and we can judge that feedback against the mark scheme to see which aspects need improving.

 

We think we have achieved holding a shot steady where approprite as we used a tripod for the shots we knew needed to be steady, and then panning for the more up-beat nature shots.

 

However, we need to improve framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate. Several shots need improving because of things that appeared on the camera that we were not aware of when filming, such as a changing of set in the attic shots, and concrete blocks in the shots where a fence in used; this also reflected in the feedback we recieved.

 

This then links to selecting mise en scene, including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting as the attic shots and shots that included a fence are not up to the high standard we wish to achieve. In order to achieve higher marks we will re-shoot this footage with more suitable location and setting within the scene. We plan to film the attic shots in an exterior location to match the rest of the video, and we will ensure there are no fences that occur within our framing of the scene. We plan to change a few outits also to accomodate for the cold weather, however the fabrics will still look summery to tie in with our genre and theme of video.

 

When creating our final version we will ensure that sounds with images and editing is appropriate for the task. We will ensure that the lip syncing is perfect and there is no delay or increased speed of singing to make our video look professional and to make it a level 4.